| Reviews for The Old Days |
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Sakura Reyna 12/21/10 . chapter 1Me Too! I wanna go back to the Good Old Days, too! Long live the 90s! I love the "Where obsessions were nothing," and "Self-consciousness was non-existent," lines.. Because I have a big problem with self-consciousness...childhood really triggers that kind of thinking, doesn't it? 5/5 |
C. Tattiana H-H 11/27/10 . chapter 1I really like the message of this poem. I definitely feel you on it, which made it enjoyable to read. I really liked the last line, as well, because it gave the poem purpose, more than just pointing out what had changed and what you would like to be. I think it was a strong way to end and definitely had a lasting impression. Review courtesy of The Review Game’s Review Marathon. For more info, visit the link on my profile. |
The lone canine 11/21/10 . chapter 1This poem speaks volumes and has a huge meaning to it. Very well written and very good. Great job! |