|Reviews for Of Raine and Fate|
| Kellys Sister 6/25/11 . chapter 20
wow another amazing story. I loved the bet and the sequel was better. i dont think it went to fast, sometimes love does that. what i dont get is why jack died? was there a lesson or a reason that i just didnt notice, or was it just another whim? i would love to understand why it happened because i was crushed when he died. that was the only complaint i could have, it was a very well written story. :)
| addicted 3/23/11 . chapter 20
I just read both stories today...this one and "The Bet"...i liked both, but not so much the epilogue for this story...as in its fine jack died...but i feel like she and her dad shouldn't have been as close...it was her dads fault he died, and i feel like there should have still been some sort of distance between her and her dad...other than that...i loved it...i LOVE THEO!
| sydney420 3/16/11 . chapter 20
I liked this story, but a little revising never hurt anyone. I noticed a few grammer, spelling, mistakes ect.
I rooted for Theo the whole way through. It kind of weirded me out how he was her cousin - maybe even brother - and yet they were kissing and blah blah? haha, but i still liked them anyways.
It sucked Jack died. It would of been more interesting if he was just hurt, or confined to a wheelchair, or if theo or someone else died too.
I was disappointed you didn't write a chapter about Emer's death.
I think a sequel about Abigail, or Georgia finding love would be great!
Also, i was very disappointed it was never included in the epilouge if Hazel and Peter had kids, or if Theo and Raine ever found love.
Also, I know I'm a little late (as this story was posted last year)
BUT I WOULD LOVE LOVE LOVE to co-write a story with you:) just sayinn. if you interested, feel free to email me at I'd love to hear from you.
Thanks for the read!
| mihaela 1/6/11 . chapter 20
why did you kill Jack, I would like a happy ending for Raine.
| Novocaine for the Soul 12/30/10 . chapter 17
Wow that was so sad. I actually thought that she would get pregnant, but I suppose that would have caused a scandal. I didn’t expect Jack to die, but I’m sure I’ll get over it eventually.
I’m not sure if you should do another story but that’s up to you. As for mine I started the rewrite and a prologue of sorts is up if you want to read it.
| Novocaine for the Soul 12/30/10 . chapter 3
Oh noes! You should have never told me about the sequel :D now I shall procrastinate even more.
Really you mean his father is that guy… shoot I can’t think of his name. The one that kidnapped her mum? This could get very interesting.
| Kid Pepper 12/16/10 . chapter 20
Awesome! Good job on yet another story!
I think it did go by too fast, but I liked the ending, and I thought it was realistic that it's taken her a while to get over him, and she didn't just go to Theo right away
I'll be looking for your new stories
| Lady of romance world88 12/12/10 . chapter 20
Hey. Yay that jack and raine are going to run away together.h Aww... How cute romantic elope story :} How dare Marc beat Jack up and slap Raine. Omg Marc shot Jack why? Jack is his son and his blood. Poor Raine :( I just wish Anthony should have save Jack's life that Jack protect Raine from Marc. I am sorry to hear thAt Emhr has died during childbirth :( Abagail is a beautiful name for Jonathan's daughter :) Ah Georgian has crush on Rogue. aww how cute :) I glad that Raine is happy now but still love Jack so much. I hope that you can write Peter's story or Georgian's story or Kieran's story or Abagail's story please thank :) keep writing. I am look forward to read your next story. Your story is so beautiful and i anu
amire Theo's honest plus helpful :)
| hollywood920 12/11/10 . chapter 20
ahh! I loved it! I read the whole thing this morning and instantly grew attatched to all of the characters! you should continue and write a story about Georgia and Kieran! Anyways I loved it! you are a great writer keep writing!
| Curlysquirt95 12/10/10 . chapter 20
Great story! I was a little depressed that Jack had to die because he seemed like such a sweet guy. And I do hope that Theo and Raine eventually get together. Nice work! :)
| WithAPenAndPaper 12/10/10 . chapter 20
You know, I am actually ok with Jack's death now. It was necessary, I guess. You did an amazing job on this story! You put so much effort into it! It's AWESOME! Wonderful job, I really mean it.
| WithAPenAndPaper 12/10/10 . chapter 19
No, No, NO! Jack died! No! You made me cry! WHY? Why must he die?
| Insanity Streak 12/10/10 . chapter 19
Oh my gosh I can't stop crying :( I can't believe Jack is dead, an amazing chapter as usual, but it made me cry! :'( Can't wait to read the next one...
| Curlysquirt95 12/10/10 . chapter 18
Great chapter! I feel so bad for Theo-he helps his love run away with her true love. :( Cliffhanger at the end of this chapter. I'm suspecting it's Marc who jumped out of the bushes. (I hate that man) Continue soon! :)
| WithAPenAndPaper 12/10/10 . chapter 18
I did enjoy it, very much. I cannot believe the story is almost over! You did an AWESOME job writing it!