wow another amazing story. I loved the bet and the sequel was better. i dont think it went to fast, sometimes love does that. what i dont get is why jack died? was there a lesson or a reason that i just didnt notice, or was it just another whim? i would love to understand why it happened because i was crushed when he died. that was the only complaint i could have, it was a very well written story. :)

I just read both stories today...this one and "The Bet"...i liked both, but not so much the epilogue for this story...as in its fine jack died...but i feel like she and her dad shouldn't have been as close...it was her dads fault he died, and i feel like there should have still been some sort of distance between her and her dad...other than that...i loved it...i LOVE THEO!

I liked this story, but a little revising never hurt anyone. I noticed a few grammer, spelling, mistakes ect.

I rooted for Theo the whole way through. It kind of weirded me out how he was her cousin - maybe even brother - and yet they were kissing and blah blah? haha, but i still liked them anyways.

It sucked Jack died. It would of been more interesting if he was just hurt, or confined to a wheelchair, or if theo or someone else died too.

I was disappointed you didn't write a chapter about Emer's death.

I think a sequel about Abigail, or Georgia finding love would be great!

Also, i was very disappointed it was never included in the epilouge if Hazel and Peter had kids, or if Theo and Raine ever found love.

Also, I know I'm a little late (as this story was posted last year)

BUT I WOULD LOVE LOVE LOVE to co-write a story with you:) just sayinn. if you interested, feel free to email me at I'd love to hear from you.

Thanks for the read!

why did you kill Jack, I would like a happy ending for Raine.

Wow that was so sad. I actually thought that she would get pregnant, but I suppose that would have caused a scandal. I didn’t expect Jack to die, but I’m sure I’ll get over it eventually.

I’m not sure if you should do another story but that’s up to you. As for mine I started the rewrite and a prologue of sorts is up if you want to read it.

Oh noes! You should have never told me about the sequel :D now I shall procrastinate even more.

Really you mean his father is that guy… shoot I can’t think of his name. The one that kidnapped her mum? This could get very interesting.

Awesome! Good job on yet another story!

I think it did go by too fast, but I liked the ending, and I thought it was realistic that it's taken her a while to get over him, and she didn't just go to Theo right away

I'll be looking for your new stories

Hey. Yay that jack and raine are going to run away together.h Aww... How cute romantic elope story :} How dare Marc beat Jack up and slap Raine. Omg Marc shot Jack why? Jack is his son and his blood. Poor Raine :( I just wish Anthony should have save Jack's life that Jack protect Raine from Marc. I am sorry to hear thAt Emhr has died during childbirth :( Abagail is a beautiful name for Jonathan's daughter :) Ah Georgian has crush on Rogue. aww how cute :) I glad that Raine is happy now but still love Jack so much. I hope that you can write Peter's story or Georgian's story or Kieran's story or Abagail's story please thank :) keep writing. I am look forward to read your next story. Your story is so beautiful and i anu

amire Theo's honest plus helpful :)

ahh! I loved it! I read the whole thing this morning and instantly grew attatched to all of the characters! you should continue and write a story about Georgia and Kieran! Anyways I loved it! you are a great writer keep writing!

Great story! I was a little depressed that Jack had to die because he seemed like such a sweet guy. And I do hope that Theo and Raine eventually get together. Nice work! :)

You know, I am actually ok with Jack's death now. It was necessary, I guess. You did an amazing job on this story! You put so much effort into it! It's AWESOME! Wonderful job, I really mean it.

No, No, NO! Jack died! No! You made me cry! WHY? Why must he die?

Oh my gosh I can't stop crying :( I can't believe Jack is dead, an amazing chapter as usual, but it made me cry! :'( Can't wait to read the next one...

Great chapter! I feel so bad for Theo-he helps his love run away with her true love. :( Cliffhanger at the end of this chapter. I'm suspecting it's Marc who jumped out of the bushes. (I hate that man) Continue soon! :)

I did enjoy it, very much. I cannot believe the story is almost over! You did an AWESOME job writing it!