Wow, this is awesome. I really liked the rhyming too.

Thank you.

I really like this. It's touching and sad and... Well, true. We don't really think about it, but it is quite selfish of us once you realise. It's a really good poem, it has a nice sort of flowing rhythm to it and I really like it. Well done! :)

these is really good...

Best poem I have ever read, touching and heartfelt. You have a gift- Use it.

Very touching and a reminder for us to be mindful, truly mindful of others in ALL respects including this one. Thank you!