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LachesisÂȘ
Natasha Browning
2001-06-07 . chapter 5
Write more, please!!!!!! If this really *isn't* the end, then prove it! (Blackmail... what a wonderful way to get this written!)
KAtramarina
2001-06-01 . chapter 4
Cewl! A little tad sad, but thats okay. Please write more. I'm out of suger right now, but you never know. Review it later.
Natasha Browning
2001-05-19 . chapter 3
Wow... kewl! Please write more, it looks like quite a tale!
Jerry Christianson
2001-05-17 . chapter 3
Whoa. That was pretty cool! I can't wait until you add more chapters. But don't pressure yourself to hurry through the story for the sake of your audience!
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