This is truly beautiful, heart felt piece. I love the emotion as it comes across well and really paints a lovely picture.

I also like that each of the actions matches the person doing it, as it's obvious you didn't simple randomly match actions to people as you thought of them.

-From the Review Marathon (check out the link in my profile)

I like this. It's really sweet. I like the metaphor here. You carry it through the piece really well. I also like your take on thanksgiving. It's done a lot and can be really cliched, but I think you did a good job here of making a great poetic piece that works with thanksgiving, but isn't cliched or sappy. Well done.

PS Check out the Review Game and/or it's Review Marathon (links in my profile!)