Really Beautiful x

this is so true...

I like the layout you've got here, it feels neat and ordered while still holding the emotion needed when talking about this subject.

However, you do get a little generic towards the end. You start off with 'scribbling' and 'ripping', but end with 'trying' and 'caring', which are words used a lot. I get that they fit in, but some more unique words could have been used.

You've got a strong ending, and it holds a kind of dead finality (that's a good thing! :P).

Lastly, this line: "{can you hear the nin?}" stumped me. What did you mean by it? I have the feeling it should be really obvious, but I'm not sure. :/

-From the Review Marathong (check out the link im profile)