this is so funny and good. :D

Alex, I am looking forward to Chapter 2. I got some good LOLs reading your commentary of Black Friday. You truthfully have some good insights to the mass consumer mayhem that the day creates and like you I can actually see it going to a 2 day event. How sad to think that people would rather be in the mob of shoppers than home with family. Keep up the writings!

Pretty amusing, decently written, even verging on, but not quite reaching, very good. With just a few snippets, might make a great introduction to a full-length story.