Well, I can't say I'm not somewhat dissapointed with the ending

That's not to say it wasn't good. It was all very beautifully written and I nearly cried at the part where Amy "bonds" Teddy. Sigh... -.- I guess I just way too high expectations that she wouldn't end up with the obvious choice like in so many other stories. It was probably because there had been so much focus on Ives for a while and since there were 2 parts to it that I had extra hopes for this story compared to others which just caused for greater dissapointment.

Again it was still a very good story overall

I'd seriously love for you to write a sequel.

I can't believe it just ended. :

HAHAHA. It was amaaaaaaazing though! Insanely realistic. Can't believe I didn't get the full-blown happy ending. HAHAHA. But I guess a subtle one like this is pretty awesome too. ;)

Loved it. Keep writing!

Perfect. Not the totally happy ending where everything is perfect, but a future with potential. This journey through Amy's life is beautiful. The character development in this story is spot on with all of them. However, you did leave a bit to be desired about Ives and Wayne. But, I guess that's why you're writing a spinoff about the former. The anticipation of waiting for it to be completed so that I can read it won't be so great. I can't wait

I really loved your story. No joke. I also get how you lovedyour ending. But after what happened whenever they "broke up" last time. All this crap happened. Please! Write at least a summary of what happened to them. I'm dying on the inside. Seriously. I'm going to be depressed now because I'll have thoughts of him leaving her.

Again I love your story. Personally I think the ending was okay but not great. I think you are a brilliant writer though. Keep writing because you have a talent!

Just at least think about an epilogue or a summary of what would have happened to themin the end. Please and thank you!

:P

Katherine

liked this story was a lil complicated for meh but was good but im not gonna stop wanting an epilogue and becuz this story is dramatic and im drunk on it right now im gonna say this cheesy line that u will come back one day to this story (preferably 6 months from now on june 31st 10pm lol) and write a friggin long epilogue that makes us all happy, has no cheesy deep lines, and is simply just showing us that yes, they fell in love and it makes no sense no one cares but damn all they're in love! and yea .

Oh My Fucking God.

You made me cry!

Which sounds like the accusation of a bullied school child, but yeahh...still.

Really good story; read-it-all-in-one-sitting kind of good.

:)

I hate the ending. I suppose you get that a lot though.

The only thing I got out of this: I feel SO bad for Trevor.

:oO That sounds amazing, I would love to do that with my group. XoDDDDD I could so see that. I would be singing in front of all those professionals! They'd probably get a kick out of it!

YOU BITCH! the anger i feel towards you is soooo big that i can't think of a word that is big enough. grr you.

how dare you write an amazing story and just FUCKING END IT

no i love you or they were never together in the end

it's just over... why oh why did you have to do this!

you grrrrr... so in my head they're going to get back together and together forever :)

because i love them... and you :*

keep writing :)

wow, what a beautiful story;

touching,amazing plot,

greatly developed characters,

and believe it or not it somehow gives perspective on how one should/shouldn't view life.

after finish reading this story in one day and getting very emotional at times, i understand that the title, the last chapter especially the ending mean so much more.

yes, im dying for an epilogue but that will defeat the purpose of the story, right?

hope.

p/s: i hope while writing ives' story u will give some hints on how our 2 main characters living their fictional lives.

i realy hate it when i read stories about how the guys always moved on, happy dandy after broken up from a meaningful relationships and yet the girls always so stuck and hung up on their old boyfriends.

its so frustrating to read about these situations.

i know its partly amy's fault when she refused to face her issues and pushing every problem away.

and for nikita, maybe his not all happy dandy bc the talk with amy is not at all finish at this point but still..

he obviously deserve to be happy now cause he worked for it?

i dont know but i guess i will in later chaps.

im just being emotionally into the story.

love the story so far despite my babbling.

kudos

yay! the story is completed!

i will review later after finish reading it.

kudos

I really wish you would write a sequel, but oh well.

It truly is an amazing story, I was so connected with the characters.

Constantly yelling at my laptop like a buffoon.

Half of me wanted an epilogue, but then again, half of me always wants an epilogue of something I love. When I saw there were only three, then two, then one chapter left I was a bit confused as to how you were going to end this without me hating you, but you did a great job and I think you ended this perfectly. I think this was a great story with a good plot and a good balance of the emotional and the light hearted. To feed my epilogue craving I'm also glad that you're writing spinoffs haha. :D Thank you for a great read, you're a brilliant writer. :)

Love Zippy x