Well, that had some interesting, beautiful imagery. I'll be back for more of this.

Cleverly done, and wondrous conceptual imagery.

Brava!

that's interestin, it's true, people just can get peace in death.

I love the personification and vivid imagery in this lovely poem

I think you should definitely continue on with your writing! Very evocative imagery here. :)

It might help the reader if you reworked the formatting, though, just to break it up a little and make it easier on the reader's eyes. You could also just post each haiku in a separate chapter. That's what I would do, for one.

Delicate and fragile, thin and strong

Life is broken and mended, mended and broken

I like that part.

cool.

I've always enjoyed good poetry of any genre. I have to respect anyone that can do such fine work with haikus, knowing they are more challenging that most. Good work.