in addition to my last reveiw. Katniss Everdeen is an inspiration for Jericho?

have you ever read 'The Hunger Games'. I can tell, because this is very very very very very very very simmiliar. I know it's not the most wll known book, but it's known. Sorry.

Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next update :)

Ooh! Gallows twist cliffhanger? AWESOME! Spooky dream, too! I like Seamus. Why do I get the feeling that in his spare time he sneaks into the training rooms and plays with the weapons for the fun of blowing things up?

"That, however, shouldn't stop my deathly good looks and ravishing charm." Oh, the ego. :D I wonder if Lyndsey is impressed by confidence and silliness? I can't wait to see the chapter about her! xD

I really like the story, but at one point I saw that you put Male, but the person picked was female. It also sounds a lot like the Hunger Games. Still, I like the story. Keep writing.

Hate to break this to you, but... this is basically the Hunger Games series reskinned.

You mention an Arena (Hunger Games). It takes place in the ruins of the USA (again, HG). 'Gameland citizens' - Gameland is basically the Capitol. Hell, you even mention the word 'Capitol' at oone point. Pre picked names (basically the Reaping in the HG series). I don't know if you were intending to copy the Hunger Games, but to me the connection is kinda obvious.

Don't get me wrong. I like your writing style and you've put a few good ideas of your own in there :)

I love it.

:D :D :D

x Katy

Very good! I don't know why, but I feel REALLY BAD for the girl who got chosen. :D

No, seriously, really good, as always.

One continuity problem: here you wrote "Her hand reached in and a gender was called: Male"

but a second later you said "I had nothing to worry about from the start. The gender had been female, after all."

Sorry I'm not trying to nitpick or be a brat, just trying to be helpful. Keep it up- this story is exciteing!

Awesome! Can't wait for the next update :)

AWESOME! Can't wait for more! :)

good story, you have to write more though :) there's a few grammatical errors, but i love it :)

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Holy cow. Scary!

But so good! I liked it a lot. It was mysterious and cryptic, but very very good! You, ma friend, get some cyber cookies. But don't spoil your dinner with them. Dinner FIRST, THEN dessert. They're my favorite kind of cookie: apricot jewell cookies. Look them up; they're delish.

Anyway, back to relevance, I really liked this. Is there more? Is it gonna be a series? Or is it a one-shot? Either way, I LOVE it!