|Reviews for Finale|
| PantheraDecay 1/6/11 . chapter 1
Panthera followed the storyline. She liked the way you jumped along. It made it interesting... Fun? Perhaps. Yes.. Yes fun.
| Imagination Creations 12/4/10 . chapter 1
Well, I'm not a mean critic, but I could not follow the storyline. It was scattered and rather boring. Maybe adding some more detail, like the hero's name would help. I hope that this critique will help you in the future.