| Reviews for Lonely |
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Elizabeth Alan 1/28/11 . chapter 1I really like this and could relate to it. |
BookcraZzaY 1/14/11 . chapter 1omg heart it again amazing job |
SomeRandomScribbles 12/4/10 . chapter 1Very moving :) We all feel like this sometimes, so a lot of people could connect with this poem. You express emotion really clearly, especially in the lines: "Laughing when I want to cry/Smiling when I want to sob". There are a couple of typos - ("Walk be carefree") - but not many :) I'd have probably put "Read romantic novels" so you'd have the repetition, but that's just an idea Good stuff :) |
kloun mannequin 12/4/10 . chapter 1I guess nobod wants to be alone, so this it's touching. |