|Reviews for Lonely|
| Elizabeth Alan 1/28/11 . chapter 1
I really like this and could relate to it.
| BookcraZzaY 1/14/11 . chapter 1
omg heart it
| SomeRandomScribbles 12/4/10 . chapter 1
Very moving :) We all feel like this sometimes, so a lot of people could connect with this poem. You express emotion really clearly, especially in the lines: "Laughing when I want to cry/Smiling when I want to sob".
There are a couple of typos - ("Walk be carefree") - but not many :) I'd have probably put "Read romantic novels" so you'd have the repetition, but that's just an idea
Good stuff :)
| kloun mannequin 12/4/10 . chapter 1
I guess nobod wants to be alone, so this it's touching.