|Reviews for I Need You|
| Marionettes 12/6/10 . chapter 1
This is touching :) reminds me of young love.
Some of the stanza breaks are somewhat erratic however.
All around, beautiful .
| Camilleta 12/6/10 . chapter 1
"baby, what's the sun supposed to do?" i love that line. ) also, "i think of how much prettier i'd be - if you were standing next to me." you have a way with words, one of the best authors i've seen, definitely.
| kloun mannequin 12/6/10 . chapter 1
I like the repetition bout the sun and the bones part.