|Reviews for Chaos|
| Pandaemonic Paradigm 8/6/06 . chapter 1
That's a pretty cool poem. I like how simply it ends. "Echoes off mountains controls me now" made the least sense to me.
| Montiago 6/30/06 . chapter 1
your title's not the only things that chiche...the poems "wonderful words" are nothing special. maybe if they hadent been used in the thousands of other poems on this site...
| Rozlin 1/8/05 . chapter 1
very good. very very good.
| ThePrue 4/13/04 . chapter 1
The words you used were very good, i realy got what you were trying to say, but it wouldn't hurt to change the title of it to something more unique, i even hace a story under the same name, no comparison, i liked it.
| Tweek 6/4/01 . chapter 1
This is really good, dark and depressing, but still great poetry.
| solii rose tinted 5/18/01 . chapter 1
Very powerful words. I understand the sleep thing- it is a nothingness that mostly feels better than the 'chaos' of reality. Unfortunately, I only managed 3 hrs last night. The specific words seem to be chosen carefully; they are beautiful in themselves and contribute to the style of your piece. Great writing. Solii