I feel like this would make a great song. So heartbreaking and powerful. Wonderful job!

I lost the dearest, sweetest, most innocent little niece some years ago. Reading this poem reminded me of her. There is nothing so beautiful as the light of innocence and love in a child's eyes- nor so heartbreaking as to lose it.

Wow this is beautiful :) Well written, it flowed nicely and the emotions poured out. Amazing.

I'd really like it if you reviewed my story; it's in need of feedback, and I think you could help me! Thanks.