|Reviews for Exit Music|
| classic violet 12/29/11 . chapter 1
I love the story this tells. Amazing, as always.
| simpleplan13 2/6/11 . chapter 1
I really liked the first stanza. I thought that description was really great and I liked the word chcoies of hypnotizing and captive and phantom.
The second stanza was great too. I love how you tied it back to the exit music with the end of the credits and again your word choices like tethered and betstowing were really great.
In the third stanza I feel like I missed something. I wasn't sure what the notion was that you feel in love with and I also didn't get why a sould would break during birth.
That last couplet while I loved it by itself as such a simple and blantantly true statement, somehow I didn't get it's connection the rest of the piece.
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| nickyO 12/26/10 . chapter 1
This is well thought out and carefully/wisely written. Ideas are dangerous things to fall in love with. ;)
| fatbird33 12/17/10 . chapter 1
enjoyed the last stanza
| amavian 12/10/10 . chapter 1
i keep going over the phantom line again and again.