I wonder if a parent comes in. this story is interesting, and I hope you update soon. Sorry I took so long to review, not much time in life anymore.

I went to the links on your profile for the characters.

My favorites were Adam, James, Dylan, and Cale.

Travis Fimmel with long hair *sighs*

Great story!

oh it getting good now whos that coming thorugh the door yeah update

Ah the cruelty, can't wait to see the next chapter.

JM

I have an issue with your view switches. I have no clue who the characters are when you swith away from Lane. Can you please put their name above the viewpoint switch? Viewpoint switches are one of my pet peeves because they often end up confusing me because I can'ttell whose view they are from.

Otherwise I really liked your story. The details were nice and the similes and metaphors were creative.

I love love love love love this story!

Please update soon!

All right, I just LOVE the fact that there are SO many boys around our heroine! And Lane is such a great heroine, really. She says what she thinks, but she is not bitch all the time or without reason.

Congrats, and please, keep writting!

AWESOME!

THIS IS GREAT!

on my other reveiw by first chapter i meant prologue it was obviously rape since she was unwilling. But i did sorta rush over the prologue so i might have read wrong but otherwise i still like everything

FIRST CHAPTER IS RAPIST! dude raping ppl isnt cool. I speak to the rapeist of the chapter not the author

Oh, interesting that last bit.

JM

I love this story!

All your characters are deep and lovable, Lane is amazing, a very original heroin. And all the athmosephere of the chapters is really awesome. And I love, love, love Montana! And the houses are so, oh... beautiful. I'd give my left eye to live in one of those.

Please, please, please, keep writing, yeah?

I listened to that Honky Tonk song from the other chapter, so funny. Loving the dynamic in this story and cannot wait to see how everything develops.

JM

And so the scene is set, I suppose now its just a case of seeing what you do with it.