OMG this chapter was ABSOLUTELY EXCELLENT-I LOVE the zoo altho I prefer the zoo in Portland than I do Fresno's but oh well! One of these years I want to go to the San Diego zoo! HMMM I would have thought those wolves would have felt a kindred spirit in Lukas-I was wrong! I know everything Emma said about wolves and her loving them BUT wolves and werewolves to me would be completely different things and still WONDERING how she will react when Lukas tells her about himself-I AM GETTING TO EXCITED at the prospect-ANOTHER FABULOUS AND EXCEPTIONAL CHAPTER Tumble!

This chapter made me smile like the Cheschire Cat-it was so sweet and I know my sister would die to see a Bronco's game in person! She is a big bronco's fan whereas I am a Dolphin's fan. She is getting more and more comfortable with Lukas huh? I wonder how she will react when she knows his secret-hmmm cannot wait for that myself! GREAT JOB!

Whoa

SIS in bed-can't wait for more!

MY MY MY-they finally had their first kiss-LOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT! I really ENJOY how you have written Emma-STRONG, INDEPENDENT yet still SOFT, LOVING and NEEDING HELP AT TIMES-you wrote her as a well rounded person thus far and I LOVE IT! It is a nice change from the damsel in distress stories altho I do LOVE THEM TOO. My heart leaped at the park scene-EXCELLENT WRITING!

Oh how I ADORED THIS CHAPTER! I don't understand how anyone could hate this story-I THINK IT IS AMAZING! If someone doesn't like it then they don't have to read-I think you are doing a MOST MARVELOUS JOB with it myself Tumble! I am ENRAPTURED WITH THIS WORLD YOU HAVE CREATED and your characters are GREAT! Keep up the BEAUTIFUL WORK-YOU HAVE AN AVID FOLLOWER IN ME!

AAAAHHHHH the SWEETNESS is coming in to play now-and it made me GRIN EAR FROM EAR! I HAVE DEFINITELY FALLEN HOOK LINE AND SINKER FOR YOUR STORY!

I AM DYING HERE-what MORE do you have coming up that is going to COMPLETELY BAMBOOZLE ME? I am LOVING how this story is really keeping me on my toes and in a CONSTANT STATE OF EXCITEMENT and EAGERNESS-you are BRILLIANT!

OH BLOODY HELL Tumble-INTENSE, HEART POUNDING! PERFECT STORY, PERFECT WRITING-OUT OF THIS WORLD FABULOUS!

Ok-I know now who those men are-they are hunters and ran into the two of them BUT I still don't know what Emma's secret is-and it is KILLING ME! Now, I am also CURIOUS ABOUT Amber-what is she hiding? I hope they find her fast and rescue her before too much happens to Emma-I really LOVED her crass personality! I know she won't be killed but still-I don't want to see her hurt either! I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER SO HEADING THERE NOW-I AM IN COMPLETE AND TOTAL AMAZEMENT!

You know how ironic it is that I was listening to a song called Howl (by FLorence The machine) when I stumbled across this?

WOW-ok you have really made my CURIOSITY JUMP with this chapter! Emma has a secret now and I JUST HAVE TO KNOW WHAT IT IS and then for her to be ATTACKED-WHAT IN THE WORLD IS HAPPENING? Oh my goodness-this is really getting EXCITING and I AM DYING HERE!

Ok Tumble-can I ask you a question without seeming stalkerish? Are you from California? I won't ask which town but I will tell you this-I know Farmersville-it is not too far from where I live. I live in Hanford and my sons father lives in Visalia an his parents live in Exeter! I nearly fainted when I read this chapter and saw that town in here! Not too many people know of the smaller towns of California. Now regarding this chapter-BRILLIANT, OUT STANDING, PERFECTION and I couldn't help but GRIN and BOUNCE in my seat-LOVED IT! YOU HAVE A GREAT STORY GOING HERE AND AMAZING WRITING!

That was quite an interesting date and most guys would have walked off if they saw it was male strippers-I know I would but that is beside the point! She is wearing down but still refuses to admit wholely to herself let alone him-this is PERFECTION to me!

What did his pack do to make him leave? To hate them? Hmmm another mystery to try to wrap my mind around-just PERFECT! I think it is smart to keep Emma out of this but who knows what will happen later-huh? EXCELLENT STORY and AMAZING WRITING!