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| Reviews for Howl |
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   Binkybaby 11/22/12 . chapter 12Update soon |
| Someone 3/27/11 . chapter 1 Lame. |
| Crystalynn 3/15/11 . chapter 1 This needs some work my friend! You've somehow managed to go an entire first chapter without telling me anything about the protagonist. How old is he. Is he hansome? Tall? Short? What color hair? Eyes? The "action" is dry and there isn't enough description to help me visualize the setting. Is it morning, noon, or night? The humor at the end was nice, at least, but the ending itself doesn't tempt me to click on to chapter II. Frankly, I'm wondering why he's bothering to leave california to begin with. I don't have much sympathy for his pack, since I know nothing about it, and find it strange that he'd leave his current pack since they are so welcoming toward him. Overall I don't feel the character is familiar, don't have a handle on the setting, conflict or supporting characters, and therefore have no desire to read onward. "Dry" is how I would sum up this first chapter in one word. Give it another look and see if you can't add some life! |
| Rain 3/9/11 . chapter 1 This is bad. Really bad. |
| god 3/3/11 . chapter 2 I HOPE THE REASON YOU HAVEN'T UPLOADED ANYMORE IS BECAUSE YOU REALIZED HOW FUCKING RETARDED YOU ARE AND SHOT YOURSELF! FUCK YOU ASSHOLE! |
| god 3/3/11 . chapter 2 I WISH THERE WAS MORE JUST SO I COULD TELL YOU HOW MUCH THIS SUCKS! YOU'RE SO RETARDED! WHO THE FUCK WRITES SHIT LIKE THIS? |
| god 3/3/11 . chapter 2 FUCK YOU AND YOUR FUCKING RETARDED CHARACTERS! HA HA YOU SUCK BALLS! |
| god 3/3/11 . chapter 1 THIS SUCKS LIKE YOU! |
| You mom 1/17/11 . chapter 2 Someone needs to learn how to write. Loser. |
| You mom 1/17/11 . chapter 1 This sucks! Worst thing I've read on here ever! |
| Guest 12/19/10 . chapter 2 yeah you should just stop writing now. |
| Guest 12/19/10 . chapter 1 wow. this is probably the stupidest thing i've ever read. |
