This is soooo cute! It reminds me of my sort-of cousin Trevor...I can see this happening when he gets older. Maybe even this year. I swear he is the cutest little tree year old genius ever.

This was so adorable, I loved it! Nathan is just so *cute*! :D

I loved this story! You really got inside the kid's head! Very accurate!

I loved it. You captured the child-like mind-set perfectly, and set it out upon an unsupecting reader (that's me). I like this style very much, and your execution was wonderful. I hope you keep writting in this genre, because from this, it seems to be your strength.

Oh, and happy holidays to you, too!

Amazing and spectacular, like usual. I loved the childish view of "But I can explain..." The imagination this child has is incredible in itself - such faith and confidece in him! I'm sure, with this special letter written and mailed, Santa couldn't help but give him an extra little something for pleading his case. And with the way Nathan was persuading, I'm a little convinced myself he didn't deserve all those scoldings.

Great job! Keep up the fantastic work. :)