|Reviews for Moment of Truth|
| Dreams-are-Reality 12/25/10 . chapter 1
Wow, you said what I have always wanted to voice to certain others. There's no spelling mistakes and it mostly flows well, except for the very end:
"What are you going to do about?"
I think it would read better as "What are you going to do about it?" as in "it" referring to the earlier question.
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