|Reviews for Twisted Progress|
| Margaret 12/31/10 . chapter 1
| Tapioca-Robot 12/22/10 . chapter 1
Very sad and dark. great way to get the point across though. It's a very typical message, but I do like what you've done with it by focusing far more on the destructive saw than the destruction of the tree. The implication this provides is interesting, and perhaps draws in a reader better than the over used "poor poor nature". Not that there is anything wrong with the ladder, but your approach is fresh and interesting, very well done.