I Like this poem for it's simple message. Nicely done... nice rhyming structure, you don't leave yourself constrained I like it alot.

Concise yet powerful. Really nice work!

Lovely poem.

That's basically how society works. You gotta go out there and prove yourself.

Good job.

I love the message of this nice short poem, and the fact it is short and simple.

Also I just wanna add this, standing tall doesn't just count for the big, or exciting, or important things in life, it also counts for the small things in life. Stand tall ALL the time, not just when there's a crowd of people to watch. Stand tall, even if the crowd of people will scorn you for it, stand tall.

Really lovely, and entirely true. Very VERY true. And how we all think that people should notice us, when we're not doing enough for them to pay any attention :)