|Reviews for So now|
| the sun softly smiles 12/24/10 . chapter 1
The rhyming seems a little bit... forced and awkward (e.g., "I hope this picks up the slack", but other than that, I rather like this. No complex imagery or flowery words - it's straightforward. Honest. Nice work.
| Faithless Juliet 12/24/10 . chapter 1
I liked the thought process here - the repetative phrasing, it made me visualize the narrators thoughts. Nice job, keep up the good work.