I feel sorry for the boy that you've just described here. Which means that you've done really well in describing it all. It's a sad tale, but wonderfull written.

This one seems different than the others you have written. It's written from someone else's point of view. I like the feeling of acceptance to the fact that he might never remember. It's really hard to describe how this one made me feel. I like it though. Even though my feelings concerning it confuse the hell out of me. :] This is my second favorite of your poems. It's meaningful and beautiful, like all of your poems.