I like the way that your poem flowed. I hope to read more of your work!

aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

omg omg omg

amazingness alert

I completion love this poem! everything it so effortlessly amazing and deep and completely exquisite

:D

my only suggestion is splitting it up into stanza's bc its its a long poem...but I still love it haha :)

I like the idea a lot, and it's very good for the most part. Don't use w/o, use the words. The flow is off a bit, and you can fix that esily by adding words in here and there. I enjoyed it, it's cute and heartfelt. :)

-Cecilie