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   Yerbua-Syam 6/18/11 . chapter 7hey this is grate so far cant wait for the next chapter! |
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You 5/12/11 . chapter 7 Can't wait for more! Hope you update soon! |
| swamp13 1/13/11 . chapter 4 very good! please update soon (: |
| swamp13 1/13/11 . chapter 3 i like it (: |
| masqueraded x 12/30/10 . chapter 4 That was a really, really good chapter. Will interests me, I wish I was Elena to figure him out, and I adore the fact that Elena isn't like all those moody girls who hate their fathers for getting remarried and stuff. Update a.s.a.p! |
| masqueraded x 12/29/10 . chapter 3 Oh, it keeps getting better and better, but I am sure I will die soon if I don't get answers. Update a.s.a.p! |
| TMSantos 12/28/10 . chapter 2 Haha, she had a hand on his shirt. There are a few grammar errors, though, but the story's good. ( |
| masqueraded x 12/28/10 . chapter 2 Woah, ok... um kind of confusing. Elena acts a bit too hostile to her step-mum. Nine years. The pain should have eased up slightly. Also, when they talk its like the characters are all rambling. Punctuation marks throughout some sentences would help express emotion. The guy she bumped into seemed strange. Like... mysterious, but that is to be expected since the story's genre is both romance and supernatural. Update a.s.a.p! The story is filled with suspense! |
| masqueraded x 12/28/10 . chapter 1 Awesome, characters sharing the same name as me earn brownie points. Shortish chapter, but I think it was a great opening to the story. It was depressing though... seriously a tad terrifying. Update a.s.a.p! |
| EdellaWriting 12/28/10 . chapter 1 LOVE! UPDATE SOON :) |
