Deep

Hurting for no reason sucks but what doesn't kill us makes us stronger... Right? Eh

I feel like this was optimistic while pessimistic at the same time which really doesn't make any sense...

Psh I see no suck! I thought it was pretty good! Way better then I could do in 4 minutes anyway! Haha

I love the first day of the year it just feels so fresh and like everything'll be alright 'cause it's a new year and the problems don't go from year to year (even though they really do).

That's such a neat idea! I first saw this months folder thing and went into an was like 270? I should start at 1! So yeah I'm gonna read all of them AND comment on them! (probably...) so yeah... I dunno I guess I felt like telling you I was gonna be reading/commenting and stuffs...

Bravo for January. I remember I was quite down that time this year myself, but I've found something good this year, that I hope I can run with. Hope you've found good too. :)

Sorry about my current reviews not being as long as they usually are, but I really have nothing to say about this poem other than: esquisite. ...Which isn't how you spell that word. . But it's 2:30am so fuck it. :P

Oh no, the ending was amazing! You built up the good feeling of not being along and having someone to love and love you and then tore it awway with one sentence. Wonderfully done. :)

This poem rounded off extremely strongly, and I like how you refer back to previous poems in the new ones you write.

Even though I thought the last three lines were brilliant, I automatically read the last as "I just want everything to fall from the sky". That sounded more natural somehow than the actual version.

Lovely final line. XD

This poem fascinated me. You had three completely contrasting ideas for each of the verses, but they flowed together so well that it didn't feel jerky or forced at all.

You also made me think about what you meant and the quickly shifting emotions made it feel like a bit of a rollar coaster. :D

Congrats on The Reborn January. It's been a great set of poems! I await The Loving February. You shall have a regular reviewer for that month as well. D

*hugs back* ;)

I'm sick too! D I've been sick with a horribly annoying cold since thursday. And sleeping with your mouth open really sucks. I hate being sick. :(

Hope we both get better soon.

As I was reading this I was thinking "True , true that's very true." We do think nothing of death nowadays. Unless it's someone we are close to. And sometimes even then we'll be numb to the fact that the person is completly gone from the world.

"get your ass up that chair" I think you ment to say "get your ass off that chair" or something like that.