everything about this is just so damn beautiful, i almost can't believe it. i'm in love with this, really.

i love it. the "but i'm really i'm okay" contrasting with the "maybe i'm not okay." it's perfect. i love it.

;) i like this, sometimes i wish i could just sit and think and have a tiny breakdown, too bad i cant. please read my story, The Seein, by this profile

I adore things like this...the arrangement of the poem and how it conveys more than just one aspect. So much fun, and you did a splendid job with this one!

really loved it, particularly how you fit the poem together so that you had "but really i'm okay" going down the left hand side. a lot of people attempt this but it often doesn't make sense as they have tried too hard to make it fit in with the poem. however, you did it perfectly. well done.

LOved it