|Reviews for Three Hundredth Time's the Charm!|
| Morika 4/1/11 . chapter 1
I am too lazy to log in.
So, anyway, I kinda thought the development was a bit fast (despite the time frame and whatnot), and that they didn't have much interaction. Nevertheless, I liked it. :)
Now, I will go off-topic.
Dude, this isn't Morika. :))
I am just this person who loves to tease you.
You know who I am. :))
| FlamingInk57 2/25/11 . chapter 1
That was so awesome dude. It was so cute and I loved the way you set it out and how their relationship grew throughout the months. Good stuff dude.
| Whirlymerle 1/16/11 . chapter 1
This was too cute! I love how you show the evolution of Charlie and Reina's relationship through the months and through their perspectives. The ending is absolutely adorable.
| I'm too lazy to log in on FP 1/15/11 . chapter 1
You know me and you know I owe you LOTS of reviews. I told you this after all! SMILES!
I have problems with your switching POVs. If it's too hard to keep in First, then use third. But aside from that...
I love the way you wrote this. Unorthodox, cute and creative. I can't help but think of the people you based everyone on. Keep up the good work.
BTW, Can I request for a more volume-y work? I know I'm being selfish but you are talented. I want to see you write with more than 20 words!
Chaos EtnaHuggles! Kirk.
| I3KPop 1/9/11 . chapter 1
It was nice, and you were able to make your life experiences into a beautifully written story. It's hard not to imagine the real people behind your characters, but it was still nice. (His eyes are pretty neat! ]) Even though it wasn't the usual style of writing, I felt that it was pretty okay since it made the story easier to understand. It would be hard just delving into an emotional girl's mind. Charlie's POV was refreshing. Though I would've wanted a more tragic ending, I guess Reina does deserve a happy ending. :D Work harder! Fighting! ]
| dinkydoobeedoo 1/4/11 . chapter 1
| My Name is Rain.a 1/4/11 . chapter 1
Hi! Nice story. Although I can't keep myself from associating the real persons behind those names. I think it would be better if the POV is consistent? I mean it's first person at the start, then it turned to third person then shifted back to the first. You know. Nakakahaggard. ))
| seredemia 12/31/10 . chapter 1
I like how we could see how you kept switching between Reine and Charlie. It was a good way to make us understand the story from both heir points of views. Not to mention, we were able to get to know both of the characters, which is always a bonus. Reine seems like your typical teenage girl who's friendly to most people, since Charlie commented on how she spoke quite easily to other boys, but not to him. Charlie is cool too. Just like a cute new boy who's just trying to be friendly... You know, those types that don't exist in the real world. Sadly.
Aah. I've been spelling Reina's name wrong. Gah. Too lazy to change it. Reviewing people on my iPod really has its downside...
Gah. I just want them to talk to each other!
Aaw, how sweet! A lovely, perfect ending! This was a nice little oneshot!
| Kobra Kid 12/30/10 . chapter 1
This was a wonderful short story! The formatting is a bit weird, however. I think FictionPress probably screwed it up, I don't know. Take a quick look at it and you'll see what I mean. I don't know how to explain it, haha. Anyways, I thought that this was cute and adorable! The only suggestion I have is to write this in first person. It would let us into Charlie and Reina's mind a lot more and I think it would work better with this kind of story. Besides that, wonderful job! Loved it!
-Kobra Kid, Roadhouse
If you don't mind, can you payback via Rise From The Ashes? Thank you!
| Santa Close 12/30/10 . chapter 1
Bumobongga ka ha. Abot February :)) Jk. It's very nice. I don't actually prefer happy endings :))