|Reviews for Night and Day|
| simpleplan13 1/15/11 . chapter 1
I like this it was really cute. Kinda sing songy which works with the subject matter. And the rhyming was good. I especially liked the last two lines in the second stanza.
The only thing is the exclamation point at the end. It seemed out of place to me since you didn't punctuate the rest of the piece...