|Reviews for UnWish|
| Poisoned Twinkles 3/7/11 . chapter 1
As a star-lover, I cast this insufferably mean poem into the abyss!
Well, no, I'm not that mean.
Yes, I am a biased star lover, but this poem does speak truth. For once, I am quite stung to see a star act as a villain. Why must you do that? Why oh why?
It's true that we have the greatest power to make our dreams come true, but stars give the magic and creativity and imagination! Lol.
But I do like the implication of this line: "She wished upon a shooting star, not realizing it was foolish to wish on the fallen."
All in all, if I were an unbiased star-lover, I would add this poem to my favourites. It's good. ;)