|Reviews for Stripping The Wings|
| WritingTheNightSky 1/2/11 . chapter 1
I really like how you've written this.
It's a style that most are unable to pull off, but you did it. Very jerky (Which added to the effect of the story) with quick descriptions that gives the reader a real view of what's around.
Another aspect I found interesting was that there was no reference to there being a person, or being experiencing this at all. A very nice touch :)