|Reviews for On Rejection|
| thelulz 5/20/11 . chapter 26
This story was it all. And i can't wait until the next story!
| kissedbymidnight 5/17/11 . chapter 26
Yay! That was a great ending! It made me happy:) Confirmation for the sequel that I've been looking forward to too! Hurrah! Oooo, purple eyes. Did they happen to come for Lors?_ Not biologically of course, but is that what you were hinting? I like some of your subtle things that you put in! Great job! I'm looking forward to reading more!
| kissedbymidnight 5/17/11 . chapter 25
This was a very good chapter. It had a very conclusive feel to it. Poor Austin. He's still ashamed by it but at least Eraphir tried to comfort him. I can't wait to read his story. It's killing me! He almost seems to act like a rape victim though so it'll be interesting. I'm glad that Memphis and Eraphir are together and happy again. Poor Memphis losing his kit, but at least Daniel allowed his daddy to hold him instead of whining to be put down like a kid would naturally do at his age. Silly Kal and eating bugs. But you crave what you crave. Poor Yelkor and wanting to kiss him after that . I'm glad we got to see Yelkor's true hair color. You pay close attention to the little details don't you?:) Anyway, super great job!
| Lucky Fox 5/17/11 . chapter 26
I loved it! Loved this story. I am very excited for Austin's story. :)
| KaleidoscopeDreams 5/12/11 . chapter 24
I saw no choppines...
Just an amazing story!
Wow! What a scene!
| KaleidoscopeDreams 5/12/11 . chapter 23
I love a good mutiny!
and now that have Yakov?
Oh Yeah! This is gonna be awesome!
| Lucky Fox 5/10/11 . chapter 24
I kinda like Halor.
I also really liked this chapter, I'm sad it's ending soon! Could there possibly maybe be a story about Austin and his mate? Because I pretty much love him to bits.
| yaminoname 5/10/11 . chapter 24
Well I have finished this entire story in a think 2 days and I am surprised that I had not stumbled across it sooner. It was really good and I am always happy to see some of these works with the Zercans I think thy are called? There were so many ways that the heroes could have beaten the bad guys and so I am not surprised by the fact that they did win. I actually was listing off like five ways that they would win while the story progressed. The two major deaths did get me a bit (baby much more than Lors thought). Actually I was kind of happy that Lors died. You cant have someone live through that much misery and then keep them alive. There was no way that he would ever find happiness. There was only happiness in death for that one and so I am happy for him.
There was one other thing. I kind of wish that Halor would of told everyone his crimes, It felt like they should have been out in the open (though good that they were not I guess and thank god Lors didnt find out though). I also wanted for Aiden to find his mate and for that blue fer to die a more graphic death. But hey I have a thing for reactions and I just would like for you to go a bit more into detail
| kissedbymidnight 4/30/11 . chapter 21
Ha, no I didn't see the script_ Though this story sounds very familiar. Did you ever post it and then take it down a long time ago? Yay, for me being a good guesser. Lors, did help! He gave them the cure. Can't be more helpful than that! And oh my gosh, Kal saw the mark. I wouldn’t have guessed that anyone would find out so soon. Tolrorc better start running, especially when more Zercans figure out. Poor Austin, hopefully he will feel better now that Kal didn’t have a negative reaction to him. I have to say though that this mark makes me super excited for Austin’s story. I want to see what his mates thinks and feels when he first sees it. What will he do? Anyway, clever clever Eraphir. He noticed Austin was faking it. What’s he going to do about it though? Will that give them rights to go about the group then? I’m interested to see what happens next and can’t wait for everyone to return home. It seems likes its starting to take a toll on everyone.
| kissedbymidnight 4/30/11 . chapter 22
Oh no! Lors is dead:( That’s sad, but at least he died happy…and his mate waited for him:) That was a good emotional pull, at least for me. Good, Halyth will help keep Kal’s kit safe. Hurrah! Tolrorc was killed. I have to say I figured it would be one of the Zercans who kill him though so Halyth killing him kind of surprised me. Well, Kal’s mate is now going to be super cuddly and protective, even more so than usual. His pregnant mate was attacked. I wonder what he will do when he finds out about Austin’s being marked. Maybe nothing? Or maybe he can do even more than Kal since he is a giver and that is what Austin’s future mate would be so maybe if he heard encouraging words from a giver he’d feel even better. Anyway, hurrah again! Marun told the Zercans the cure!_ Now all that has to happen is the family members returning home or being rescued! Good chapter. I have a cold though so I can’t think too much about making super amazing guesses about what will happen next though. Sigh.
| kissedbymidnight 4/30/11 . chapter 23
Oh no, Austin is worried. But, after the mutiny is finished hopefully Kal will have time to soothe his fears. A lot happened in this chapter. Memphis is going to be rescued and will get to see his mate again! I can't wait_ Family to the rescue. I love how they all go out as a family to save one another, that's dedication and love right there. Yay! They won't be mad at Kal's mate anymore either. Can't wait to see what happens next! Great chapter!
| KaleidoscopeDreams 4/17/11 . chapter 21
Exuberant hug! Yey! You have made the rest of my day! :D
Uh Ohh...Kal's all crazy...Somebody had better locate Marun and Quick! *giggle*
Yey about the whole wrap up of the flashbacks...I loved em...very very neat way of going about that. :D
And thanks for the family scene... :D I was curious what they were doing and Memphis too...
The desert? Wow...They don't plan on letting them human much reign :D
And of course...Thank you for another installment of Yakov...I'm really bonding with that dude...His outlooks are so refreshing. :))
*dashes off to enjoy the next chappy*
| Lucky Fox 4/16/11 . chapter 22
God, the whole scene with Lors/Yurtz dying was pretty expertly written and emotional. At least he's with Ramsuri now.
| kissedbymidnight 4/15/11 . chapter 20
Great chapter! I'm glad that Austin got to see his family. Poor boy though, it's going to scar:( He's going to hide that for all he's worth and that doesn't make for a healthy mentality. I'm glad that Lors is starting to see reason though. He has good intentions for the most part and I hope he turns completely good in the end. He just needs to get away from Halyth. His brother has completely warped his mind, though he seems to be maybe coming slightly out of it. I'm also glad that we got to see Memphis again. That was nice and I'm so glad that he's feeling better and got to talk to his mate. I also like the Russian. He's rather fun. I'm very curious to see what is on that data chip. Also, Austin hasn't really become sick. Does that mean he's immune? Could he help cure all the others in some way? So many questions_
| thelulz 4/14/11 . chapter 18
Oh! I'm so excited!