This poem is brilliant!

We love it! :)

I like how it sounds exactly how a mom would talk to her kids in such situations. I love the 2nd stanza. Awesome poem!

Wow, this really took me by surprise. I liked it, it was very touching. I think the power was in how you phrased everything, like a one-sided conversation, but at the same time in a poetic way.

2nd stanza was my favorite, it moved me the most.

Keep it up!

Frac

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