This is sooooooo good! You give enough detail to add real substance to the story without boring the readers! Oh, my God, I am so envious-I get so excited when writing that I just kinda' jump through the details! Such a bad habit, but I'm hoping that I can learn a thing or two from reading your writing! )

I know reviews are the best way to keep an author motivated, so I'll try to review as often as I can! I can't promise it will be very often though, but seriously: keep writing! I really want to read more!

It sounds so beautiful. I love it! :3

okay you ahve to update now so i can find out whats happening. this is sounding really good so far.

it is very beautiful and i hope you continue with more chapters