dang... dang dang dang dang... plus many more words that would be meaningless... you need to talk to me more chica. i mean this is waswome so waswome i spelled awesome wrong. that means something

Hey oldie :) great poem! only friendly critisism you're getting from me is, "Keep it up!".

Good luck

Loved the rhyme. And I hate rhyme! So definitely take that as a serious compliment ;D It was subtle, and well rhythmed out, which made it good, rather than tacky :)

Wow! I loved this, especially the tightrope metaphor, and how it carried through to the end, and how it literately felt like it was telling me to take the leap, because it's not as bad or as terrifying as I thought. I'm unsure to whether that was the exact meaning you were trying to get across, but that's what I got from it.

It sure does sound a whole like life.

-SeparateHemispheresSAMeIdeas