Oh... my god...

This is... amazing. Slightly scary, but good (who says there's anything wrong with scary? Apart from me who's terrified of spiders and needles and isn't so fond of heights?) Very, very good. :D

It's awesome, keep writing!

PS, I'm possessed. :D :) :( :P :L :O :S :/ :\ :I :Z

PPS, You like how I actually had to start making up smiley faces there? XD

Interesting. I likes! Maybe I'm just having a stupid moment, but I'm intrigued to know what she's talking about at the end: 'Who would have thought? Who could have known?' Can't wait to read more! XD

I like it. XD I like the strange sky and the necropolis - and the mountain; I like how you only mention it very briefly once. And poor Nanima, but I think it's sweet that Appia then says that it shames her.

Keep writing! XD

I like this. It's interesting. XD Reading more now!