|Reviews for the child in the street|
| Undead Serenade 1/19/11 . chapter 1
"he looks like twelve,
but feels like thirty."
It makes me think of industrial revolution worker average death age and how life didn't last long for any of them. 12...12, such a youthful age and yet to feel 30! Yet there are people out there that feel old inside when they aren't... obviously his is for a different reason.
You have nice rhyming; I was never much of a rhymer.
Why not give the kid a pair of shoes? - but there are so many barefooted children, so I suppose candy is just easier to give. When we give impoverished children candy, does it help anything?
:( oh, the sadness.