I love this.

The rhyme is awesome.

Also, the concept of the conversation in a poem is really hard to achieve, and you got it. Awesome, keep it up

i think it has meaning, although at times the meaning is confused and you haven't expressed it very well. i'm not sure what you mean by 'dancing in other's palms'... that was odd and didn't really make sense. at times it seems you've struggled to find something to rhyme with, so you've just said something random. the rhyming can get confused and at times be very awkward.

it's ok for a first poem and i think you will improve.

It's a lovely poem and I admire you for writing so beautifully when this is your first one! Poems don't really need a summary because they are already small, so in the summary box you can write the reason you came up with the poem or to whom it refers :D

God will welcome you back with open arms, because that's what He does. I've been having a bit of a second chance myself. I'm not entirely sure what you meant by "danced in other's palms" though. Anyways, keep up the good work!

mourningstar13