Good, imaginative, fun, thought provoking.

Oooo, I like this story. It's very well written and I like the stories where someone with the "sight" tries to resist and go be "normal". It's fun watching them struggle in vain. :)

More please!

Your title seems pretty wordy, honestly.

I think combining the two would seem better. I'm of the short titles persuasion.

How about "Seeing Faeries" or "A Faerie Sight"?

Just a suggestion. :D