Nice. I like the imagery.

Saf, I swear to god, that was AMAZING. OMG. I am jealous o your amazing (poetry) writing skills. I love this poem! And, as I am way too lazy to review all your others, I'll let you know all of them are awesome (yes I've read them all). I esp loved Fallen Angel...that was...wow. Keep it up. BTW i hope you can guess who I am ;)