this was really good and well written. i liked it a lot

i really liked this chapter, it explained stuff i hadn't even thought to ask. it reslly good. update soon.

I liked this start. This is the beginning of a short series? Good start. I loved it. It seems to be a more traditional take on vampires. Not a lot of people do that anymore. Keep up the good work. I will continue to read your story.

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