|Reviews for Bullet's|
| scarletrosethorn 2/11/11 . chapter 1
wow! this so describes death and war! short sentences create tension while all the time drawing the reader in to read more!
| Mylilblackpen 1/17/11 . chapter 1
I think that is a great dark war poem which describes how tough and horrible war is. You don't go into much detail which leaves me to immagine it more which I think is great! One thing I would say is that youn need to add a 's' to 'gun' on the first line. As you refer to more then one gun. :)