| Reviews for A Need for Hope |
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Ed Harley 1/16/11 . chapter 1A good story, but I found some problems. 1) the noble struck the woman with a powerful smile- 'smile' should probably should be 'blow' 2) and for aw hile, neither moved- while 3) She helped him back to his feet- there is no mention of the woman getting herself up. |