Whatever Melody is up to, i bet it will be good :) Well update soon!

Yes that's right Caleb, stand up to Blake! Great chapter :)

This is so good! Great story, I really like it. Please update soon. :)

Oh, I like dramatic twists! The main reason for which is that I am rather good at predicting endings and though I do like it when it turns out I'm right I love it when there's a surprise (and if I predict the twist it's even better because it makes me feel clever C:)

I'm glad you're making a sequel too, I was probably going to beg for one anyways, hehe.

I loved this chapter! Does this mean Caleb is going to dump Blake? Or is he going to stay with her and stop being an ass to Melody and let Blake do whatever she wants about it? Either way thing's aren't going well for Blake, haha, good!

The only critism I have for this chapter is that when Caleb was remembering the day the photo was taken you said they were thirteen but they seemed younger than that. Maybe nine or ten? They deffinatly seem younger than thirteen.

Please update soon!

-Thalia

(PS I would love to help you with the sequal name but obviously I can't because I don't know what's gonna happen in it because I don't know how this is going to end but if I get and idea and the story goes on I'll be sure to let you know. BTW any idea how many more chapters after this?)

I think it's great XD UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

Haha if Mel is a pimp, than so am I. Anways thanks so much for dedicating ch 19 to me, that was so cool and great last couple of chapters :)

Hey there,

I'm loving this story you NEED to update soon.

When is Caleb gonna grow a backbone and dump Blake? She's a bitch and he knows it and he also knows he's falling hard and fast for Melody so what the hell?

And are Sam and Liam going to get together?

Is Ruby gonna come back into this?

Please update! *puppy dog eyes*

-Thalia

PS: Sorry for the interrogation.

Aw Liam is so sweet :) Too bad he idolizes her dad! Update soon!

It seems that Caleb wants someone other than his girlfriend, naughty, naughty lol. Good chapter!

Heyy, love the story! I couldn't help but notice a few spelling errors, but I'm not complaining! I like Liam. He's funny. Teehee. Can't wait for more updates!

FlowersOfAsh

Wow this story is really good keep up the good work and keep updating the story it really is interesting

Good story so far, although you need to work on spelling. Remember that it's with an apostrophe can never be possessive-it can only mean 'it is'. Also, you spell customer like the Halloween costume. Careful of that! Over all, however, very nice story!

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Normally, I only read completed stories(I know, Imma bitch) but this one is so good I'm going to follow it to the end!

About the whole Greek Goddess thing, Venus is Roman. The Greek version is Aphrodite. Either way, great story!