SQUE! Another Clavie masterpiece! Oh how I've missed them :D

First chapter was great! (I really need to stop using exclamation marks I think, it's getting a bit excssive :P)

Anyway, adored it, thought it was fabuous and any other praise you can think of.

I can't wait for the next one! (Oh well, I had to end in an exclamation mark now didn't I)

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Good start, glad to see a new story. The one thing is in 1940 they're not likely to be going ny carriage. Train or car is a lot more likely. Unless you meant 1840, which seems most likely.

it's a good start. i don't remember reading that allie went with marcus in the previous installment. but nonetheless, i'll go with it. could you include simon's age in the next chapter please? thank you!