|Reviews for One of the Sheep|
| Catherine Julia Jefferson 6/18/11 . chapter 1
Wasn't "A&P" by Updike?
Either way, nice story.
| Poptart Guava King 6/17/11 . chapter 2
I think Skylar is an adorable sheep. :3 kind of annoying, but i bet he's nice.
| Kate Lymric 6/17/11 . chapter 2
ooh I'm very interested...I just love cynical characters. Is Skyler really a sheepy sheep, or is Xander just being (again) cynical? Can't wait to find out! 3
| bansira 5/4/11 . chapter 1
Oh, exactly the kind of Main character I was looking for! Well, almost. I was trying to find an anti authoritarian punk one. Close enough, haha.
As of now, I can say, the story concept is interesting and has quite a bit of potential for real, actual, depth.
Namely, what puts the main character apart from the "herd"? That's a part that we got a glimpse at, and I hope it expands through the rest of the story.
Anyway, you hooked me.
Thank you for sharing your story!
| Poptart Guava King 1/17/11 . chapter 1
"And fuck me if he wasn't the sexiest sheep I had ever seen in my entire life."
That line. Made my life. I am quite taken with the sexy sheep and Alexander Valentine as well. woot!
| Rebel.Riot 1/17/11 . chapter 1
I really like the beginning you've got here. I look forward to reading the next chapter :]
| paranoid parrot 1/16/11 . chapter 1
Hello all! I'd just like to say that I'd really appreciate any kind of criticism. Anything to help make this story better. Thanks for reading!