Wasn't "A&P" by Updike?

Either way, nice story.

I think Skylar is an adorable sheep. :3 kind of annoying, but i bet he's nice.

ooh I'm very interested...I just love cynical characters. Is Skyler really a sheepy sheep, or is Xander just being (again) cynical? Can't wait to find out! 3

Oh, exactly the kind of Main character I was looking for! Well, almost. I was trying to find an anti authoritarian punk one. Close enough, haha.

As of now, I can say, the story concept is interesting and has quite a bit of potential for real, actual, depth.

Namely, what puts the main character apart from the "herd"? That's a part that we got a glimpse at, and I hope it expands through the rest of the story.

Anyway, you hooked me.

Thank you for sharing your story!

"And fuck me if he wasn't the sexiest sheep I had ever seen in my entire life."

That line. Made my life. I am quite taken with the sexy sheep and Alexander Valentine as well. woot!

I really like the beginning you've got here. I look forward to reading the next chapter :]

Hello all! I'd just like to say that I'd really appreciate any kind of criticism. Anything to help make this story better. Thanks for reading!

-Lily