haha I don't think there's anything to be nervous about. This is an amazing way of starting off on here. I love this, honestly. Also, welcome to the site.

my goodness if you consider this mediocre, I would love to see something that you are proud of, I absolutely love it, and yes welcome to the site

i like this despite the shakespearian old english thing. i think that's just me though because i never was a fan of old english. but at the same time i think it works with the theme of the poem. :D i really like it because it reminds me of the way Ophelia might say "I hate you" to Hamlet :D overall, pretty cool poem and you're a good poet :D i will be reading more of your stuff :D