He has disappeared. "Scream and you die, here and now. Be quite and you just might live." Then nothing but black.

Edit: “quite” should be “quiet”

I like your writing style, you have me hooked on this story! I was wondering though, what does Arie look like? For the flashback part, you don’t need to include the bold printed words. Just having the scene in italics works just fine.

I hope you continue with this story! It’s very interesting and I want to find out what happens next.

-Mattie

Ohh, now you got me! I want to know what happens next!

Anxiously waiting for an update,

SGM